best friends?

best friends?

624 Reads 48 Votes 4 Part Story
seung's ass By bbaeyori Updated Oct 18

[kiznaiver x oc]
six from class 2-a of sugomori high school
were being tested in the kizuna system
to find out about world peace.
but the six won't get along easily.
will they be friends? or maybe the bestest?

jamesbond3w jamesbond3w Jun 28
Mmm, really liking this series.
                              Can't wait for the OC to tell her secret .
                              BTW where and how did you make your Book cover 
                              i'm planning to make a fanfic for another series and i have a cover in mind but, i don't know where to make it
                              can you tell me where you made yours?
You need to separate when someone is talking. It's very hard to distinguish if they are in the same paragraph. I had to read over the first bit to figure out who's robbing money of who. Other then that good job👍🏻
jamesbond3w jamesbond3w Jun 28
very nice, a good start and even an insight on what happened in the van-when they got captured. The chapter picture gives a quick look on how the OC looks and so far it is very well written