The Quiet Girl Who Talks To Animals

The Quiet Girl Who Talks To Animals

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Bri By PapeRxHearT Updated Jul 02, 2011

Janie is a quiet girl. No one ever bother's her, i guess she's also invisible, she has a pet, black widow, a spider that is friendly and is named Lie. Janie can talk to animals, great thing right? You bet, she loves animal's and nature, she works at a pet shop that is not to far from the woods. She would sometimes go their to read with Lie, or just explore. One day she goes deep into the woods and discovered a secret city, one far from her home town. Instead of people, it's full of wolves, kind one's and heres the thing, the new kid at her school, Brendon Wolverton is one of them...

Doodaloo Doodaloo May 12, 2014
Sounds cool but u need to change the name its too long. Maybe the silent animal whisperer
GloriaValdes GloriaValdes Aug 01, 2013
i like the sneak peak 0:-)
                              im the type of person who does not take interests
                              quickly
                              so u r lucky :P
Morgaline Morgaline Jul 10, 2011
I love this so far!  I just started reading it, im seriously addicted. :D
JThompson JThompson Jan 31, 2011
You change tense a few times, e.g. "I can feel someone staring at me". Fix that up.
                              
                              Also, there are times when you are descriptive and I understand what the character is thinking with ease, but other times you are obtuse and abrupt, it makes the story suddenly dull and lifeless.
kittycat919 kittycat919 Jan 29, 2011
Awesome XD i loovve it!keep uploading its my dream to talk to animals lolz ur doing real good
atrocioustyrant atrocioustyrant Jan 19, 2011
r u kidding ..
                               i loove it ..
                               i want mooorree !!!
                              hahaha