Silent Heroes: Wildcat

Silent Heroes: Wildcat

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Carla By unbrokenworld Completed

"What the hell?"

I took a step closer to the mirror, staring at my reflection in disbelief.  The person looking back was still me, but at the same time it wasn't.  I had the same thick, dark, curly hair.  The same hazel eyes.  The same olive skin with a light dusting of freckles (ugh) scattered across the bridge of my nose.

But my curls were now streaked with highlights.  And not the subtle, golden-brown ones that sometimes appeared during the summer.  No, these were an aggressive, dazzling blond that went from the roots of my hair all the way to the tips.  It looked like I had spent a full day getting my hair done in some upscale salon.  Never mind that I had never set foot in such a place since the day I was born.

My eyes appeared somehow wider and more luminous.  The colour brighter, my eyelashes darker up against them.  And, when I looked closely, my pupils seemed to be slitted almost like a cat.

I looked down at my body.  My skinny arms-which had always refused to gain any definition no matter how hard I exercised-were lined with flat, wiry muscles.  My bony shoulders were now curved and smooth.  My scrawny legs were toned like a dancer.  I reached down and lifted my shirt, revealing two subtle lines running vertically down my perfectly flat stomach, hinting at the rock-hard abs underneath.

My whole body was rippling with strength.  Like liquid steel.

  • fantasy
VenFire VenFire Nov 10
*mlg shades fly onto her face and weed into her mouth as savage music plays*
nightwraith17 nightwraith17 4 days ago
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Cool, imagine if it was real! 
                              Just wondering if anyone would like to read my story (just started, so i only have one part) and any feedback would be highly appreciated. You can find it on my page, its called Bad boy's Elf.
bakaotaku9002 bakaotaku9002 5 days ago
Isnt it twice as long as a grizzly? How is it gettin its paws on a guys back which is like 2ft long
VenFire VenFire Nov 10
0 comments on the last 10 paragraphs, 278 on the shortest line.
Sweetpea363 Sweetpea363 Nov 01
the last sentence, "Her hair long and luxurious and bleach blonde." is a little bit of a run on. That's just my opinion.