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Stay With Me- a septiplier fanfiction

Stay With Me- a septiplier fanfiction

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Miss Jackson By Lexus1350 Completed

When Jack is a transfer to a new high school he is nervous. But soon he meets someone online. They talked and little do they know they live right next to each other and go to the same school. See what happens when they finally meet.

(This is my first fanfiction XD I would love some constructive criticism because I want to get better)

You could elaborate on some previous text messages where Mark possibly flirted with Jack, if not just how their conversations left (maybe even how he felt when texting Jack like, a hopeful gleam to his gloomy day)
You could explain how his face lit up when he saw Marks name, maybe a little bit of backstory as to how they met and random facts that Jack knows to put the mystery of who Mark is together
oOoOOOoooOoOOoh hear that fellow fangirls and fanboys?!?!??! We got feelings right off the bat!!1!1!1!1!
t1maelle t1maelle Dec 04, 2016
He HAVE to be ready.... If you see what I mean... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
IN THE PICTURE ON THE FRONT OF THIS CHAPTER. HE IS JUST A JACKABOY VERSION OF CHLOE (Life is Strange)