Nigmus Online (#Wattys2016)

Nigmus Online (#Wattys2016)

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NefariousAuthor By NoahBarnett6 Updated 20 hours ago

Virtual Dive technology is coming out of the workplace and into homes.  Nigmus Online is the first MMO to use this new device.  The only caveat to the game; there is no manual.  The only instruction the player gets is how to interact with the user interface.  That's it.  Nobody is going to hold their hand or give out rare items.  Players begin life as a level zero commoner.  Its entirely up to them what class they become.  Explore a world that spans five continents.  
  
  ~Story Summary~
  
  Liam is tricked into trying an expensive and innovative online MMO.  On his first trip into the game he stumbles upon a hidden class.  The Undead Necromancer.  Intrigued by this turn in events he continues to explore this mysterious world.
  
  In another part of the country Kathrine(Kat) suffers from a debilitating and paralyzing disease.  Taking part in an experimental research could offer her a new lease on life (of a sort).
  
  Even further afield Russia and China are undergoing a massive spike in suicide rate.  What could be causing so many young adults to dire ends?
  
  ~Authors Note~
  Broke into the top 10!  I am so excited by this development.  Honestly didn't think the story would be this well received.
  
  I've tried hard to make a unique game world.  Mostly its inspired by but not a copy of Log Horizon.  Its based loosely on traditional fantasy roles.  It will get updated every few days.  In the comment section let me know if you like the book.  More importantly let me know what parts you don't think work.
  
  Cover Art is without permission.  Its done by a fantastic artist named Scipio.  Here's his deviant art page.  http://rabbiteyes.deviantart.com/

- - Sep 24
Very clean sentences! It makes the action easy to follow, especially when a lot of activity is unfolding. 
                              
                              I was hoping to find some writing that incorporates gaming themes (I only joined Wattpad a few days ago), and so far there seems like a decent array to chose from, this one included!
I love this book so much Noah that im gonna read it again ❤
Mitrhe Mitrhe Oct 09
"Join Me, and together, we can rule the GAHHHH--" Sorry, I think my thumbs almost typed something they shouldn't have... Carry on!