Kidnapped by Vampires

Kidnapped by Vampires

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Brydie By Brydie101 Updated Dec 09, 2013

When Katie, A lonely teenage girl, is abandoned without family, friends or anyone to care for her, she ends up living on the streets. What happens next most people would be scared terrified but the thoughts of Katie, reveal much different.

I like it so far but there are some sentences and words that are mixed up. Please look at it.
ILuvToRead52 ILuvToRead52 Mar 06, 2014
Sounds interesting, but I'd like to know if this is a teen story.  I like the characters to be adults, well at least the male. Teenagers don't know much about life.
achilles22 achilles22 Dec 05, 2013
This is awesome, so emotionally engaging. I love how you eased a reader into this story slowly. Great job and thanks for sharing. Voted!
MargaretSemaan18 MargaretSemaan18 Apr 15, 2013
Your doing Great!
                              I love this chapter so i hope the rest of your story is as good!!
Crisann1976 Crisann1976 Dec 19, 2010
I like how her questions annoy him... you get a sense of their personalities by the way the answer each other & interact :)