When Katie, A lonely teenage girl, is abandoned without family, friends or anyone to care for her, she ends up living on the streets. What happens next most people would be scared terrified but the thoughts of Katie, reveal much different.
I like it so far but there are some sentences and words that are mixed up. Please look at it.
Sounds interesting, but I'd like to know if this is a teen story. I like the characters to be adults, well at least the male. Teenagers don't know much about life.
This is awesome, so emotionally engaging. I love how you eased a reader into this story slowly. Great job and thanks for sharing. Voted!
Your doing Great!
I love this chapter so i hope the rest of your story is as good!!
I like how her questions annoy him... you get a sense of their personalities by the way the answer each other & interact :)