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Where The Mind Is With Fear

Where The Mind Is With Fear

5.8K Reads 149 Votes 19 Part Story
Tanu Khemani By iluvreading04 Updated Apr 04, 2011

Courtney and Aarya are sisters, run away orphans. They escape and end up in Venice, only to be adopted by evil magician, Mrs.Russo. Mrs.Russo is not what she seems to be. She knows something about Courtney that nobody knows, not even Courtney, and wants to use it to her advantage. It is all up to Courtney now, to overcome her fears and save herself and her sister.

nikkipanfil nikkipanfil Jun 06, 2014
Torch and batteries kind of seem contradictory. Sorry if that comes off nit-picky.
TeddybearBunny TeddybearBunny Jan 22, 2012
luv it! check out my story if ya have time. very much appreated
treehugger11 treehugger11 Apr 05, 2011
I like the concept and your discriptions are nice but maybe you could try adding some more discritptions of what the orphanage looks like or where they are when this is happening :)
courtwriter courtwriter Mar 21, 2011
@iluvreading04        always
                              i'll continue editing it when i have more time though, k?
iluvreading04 iluvreading04 Mar 17, 2011
@courtwriter hey thnks!  =) thanks for reading n coomenting! =) ill surely look the words up before using them and type the next chapter in MS =)
                              Thanks again! =D
purplegirl14 purplegirl14 Mar 05, 2011
Very very interesting. Just read over it to check for mistakes :)