Crash

Crash

1.4K Reads 21 Votes 5 Part Story
Chris Winker By Winker Updated Apr 06, 2011

How can a plane fall from thousands of feet in the air, yet still be fine once it hits the ground? Stuck in a very surreal world, the passengers of this plane now struggle for their lives, fighting vicious shadow creatures, hoping one day to see their loved ones again. Yet, after seeing such horrors, how could they ever be the same?

Winker Winker Apr 26, 2011
@housemd12 @I_eat_you Well, I wrote this quite a while ago and was hoping you could actually review the other chapters. Like it said in the beginning, this was sort of like a test chapter. The next chapters are much more fleshed out. 
SwingMyHipsAndGiggle SwingMyHipsAndGiggle Apr 15, 2011
WOW! THIS IS AMAZING! Excellent, you captured the fear factor perfectly. You did the best thing you can do for a horror, do it on something that can happen in real life, that's how you get the reader truely scared. terrific work
Pranxtor Pranxtor Apr 15, 2011
This story is not really my type of story, but. I like the amount of detail you have put into this.
SamieFoster SamieFoster Dec 17, 2010
Unusual piece. Brings to mind Stephen King's Langolers, but thankful does take another direction. It's a bit brief. But is worth the read. I liked it. If this stories ever continues, I wonder where it will lead to. Good job.
SamieFoster SamieFoster Dec 17, 2010
Unusual piece. Brings to mind Stephen King's Langolers, but thankful does take another direction. It's a bit brief. But is worth the read. I liked it. If this stories ever continues, I wonder where it will lead to. Good job.
SamieFoster SamieFoster Dec 17, 2010
Unusual piece. Brings to mind Stephen King's Langolers, but thankful does take another direction. It's a bit brief. But is worth the read. I liked it. If this stories ever continues, I wonder where it will lead to. Good job.