My Deceiver. ||Ziam AU #Wattys2016

My Deceiver. ||Ziam AU #Wattys2016

2.4K Reads 523 Votes 27 Part Story
Cherribell🍒 By Cherribellnat Updated Jan 03

"How do except me to look at you the same!"

- Being vulnerable and opening up to people is a difficult thing this day in age. I thought I was crazy finding piece by piece of a puzzle I didn't even know existed. The ride was so fun going up...

And his deceiving ways made me come crashing down. -Zayn Mailk in My Deceiver

paviya_blue paviya_blue 3 hours ago
Oooh is this 1D mixed with 5SOS? Awesome!  This is a great start to the story;  very suspenseful and entertaining.  There were a few grammatical errors here and there but nothing too catastrophic.  Keep up the good work 👌
ccalianese ccalianese Oct 05, 2016
Such a great beginning!! Very original and descriptive. Love the last line like nothing even happened!! Good first chapter!!
pedolecki pedolecki 3 days ago
You do action well but there are a few grammar errors with misspell long but other then that everything seems fine.
megs328 megs328 Dec 16, 2016
Great start for a prologue. A few minor errors. I also like that you included other favorites. (of mine at least) I like Liam being so ballsy.
-rickstatic -rickstatic Nov 19, 2016
I LOVE THIS!!! I think that it's great that you started the book with a lot of action! Its very descriptive. I'm definitely going to read more
zoefairie zoefairie Oct 11, 2016
Your description is great already, you just need to hone it more. Perhaps you should try to have it edited or ask a beta to read it as I can spot some grammar errors here and there. It's the first time I've read badass Liam, so good job for that!