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Tattooed Hearts

Tattooed Hearts

99.6K Reads 5.9K Votes 35 Part Story
Miss Dani By Danielle_Burton Completed

Arosemena Cruz is the picture of perfection. Poised, graceful, and never a hair out of place. With a 4.0 GPA, and years of formal training, she's a shoe in for Julliard. There's only one problem: Prima Ballerina isn't something she's in a hurry to add to her list of accolades. With her mother pulling the strings, something she once loved has become nothing more than a chore. One she's more than ready to throw in the towel with. Between an overbearing mother, her good girl persona, and an uncaring family, Mena feels trapped in a world she wants no part of.
  But a fated meeting may change all that...
  Phoenix Yarbrough does little more than exist these days. After witnessing a tragedy at a young age he's left cold and empty, devoid of anything resembling life. With the ghosts of his past haunting him, Phoenix sets out to correct an injustice. Only this time around, he bypasses a system that failed him and takes matters into his own hands. He has only one goal in mind: find the man who murdered his mother. 
  Fed up with being what's expected of her, Mena seeks excitement and Phoenix is just the right amount of danger to rid her of her innocence. 
  Mena provides a beacon of light at the end of Phoenix's tunnel. With her in his life things don't seem so bleak and for the first time in years he dares to hope. 
  But when two damaged souls collide, tragedy can't be too far behind.

theShortOne3 theShortOne3 Jul 23, 2016
You have to do with the story as you see fit. For what it's worth, the first three chapters were good.
Pepsi_Coke1313 Pepsi_Coke1313 Jul 29, 2016
Don't be afraid to let the story go . Even if it's against the original plan it could turn out great just a side note
275FoLyfe 275FoLyfe Jul 23, 2016
Respectful of ur wishes & appreciate ur wrk wen "you" feel its ready to be shared. Thats why i love your wrk!! Thank u for ur honesty @Danielle_Burton. Im sure whenever its ready it'll be amazing like the rest of your stories 😊
Mew931 Mew931 Jul 23, 2016
I agree. I was (and still am) in love with the story idea, but it wasn't as.... well carried out as the first few chapters.