First Date

First Date

608 Reads 11 Votes 1 Part Story
Brittany By sunsetbeach Completed

This isn't a full story. It's just a simple short story. Just about a first date, about how I’d like a first date. Nothing long. I wrote this awhile ago and my friend wanted me to put it up. Tell me if you like it and want another short story. Maybe i'll make another one, if you ask. :)

acedreza acedreza Mar 11, 2011
alright, thats better than the last one... and certainly shows potential :P
                              oh dont mind my critique, i keep speaking :P
sunsetbeach sunsetbeach Dec 28, 2010
@WattyReader you are one of the first on this website to tell me that, thank you! :D
sunsetbeach sunsetbeach Dec 15, 2010
@karmah5 i'm always in the mood. lmao. i cant stop writing it.. thats what im doing right now :P
ashantefaith ashantefaith Dec 15, 2010
@sunsetbeach aha no problem. its happens, you were probably still in 'bonded' mode :P
sunsetbeach sunsetbeach Dec 15, 2010
@karmah5 shizzzle, better change that! my badd. :P
                              thanks for pointing that out! lol
ashantefaith ashantefaith Dec 15, 2010
i like it :)
                              im confused though, at the beginning it says "have fun tonight kaia"
                              but then it says her name is brittany. Anywhoo i thought it was cute, very descriptive :)