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The Royal Thrive (Completed)

The Royal Thrive (Completed)

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TwoPolarOpposites By TwoPolarOpposites Completed

Walking pass these beautifully painted and carved palace walls, the sounds of her high heels clacking against the marble floor as she made her way down alone echoed. Walking towards to the dead end with a door her left hand with nails that is perfectly coated in a dark red she grabs hold of the door handle. Looking behind she sees nothing but emptiness - Closing her eyes which hid her violet eyes she takes a deep breath - She's ready. 


Yet the question is - is she heading backwards… or forwards?

ventdog ventdog May 01
The grammar tense is really off putting, which makes this hard to read.
4TheLuvOfPages 4TheLuvOfPages May 25, 2016
I've never heard anyone say cooking tea lol to each their own I suppose :)
HamidehSafavi HamidehSafavi Jul 20, 2015
he has ...... there is some grammar mistake but, it's beautiful story.
Hannah_Janine Hannah_Janine Aug 08, 2013
The not being able to shift until finding your mate is a creative, original idea I've never seen before. I liked the beginning as well. :)
Hannah_Janine Hannah_Janine Aug 07, 2013
Your welcome! I feel terrible for asking, but would you mind looking at my story "Peace and Security"? I've put in a preface and chapter one with absolutely no feedback and it sucks. I think if it doesn't start getting somewhere I might just drop it.