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A Slippery, Running Heart.

A Slippery, Running Heart.

213 Reads 5 Votes 1 Part Story
yeah By shahberi4 Updated Nov 17, 2010

a poem

- - Aug 05, 2012
What happened to you????
                              This showed up in my recommendations. Somehow I never voted for it.
                              I MISS YOU!
                              ~ Eke ~
tiptoe13 tiptoe13 Mar 16, 2011
Awesome! I read it a few times and it all links together so well! I especially enjoyed how we don't really know what's going on until the end; nice cliffy haha
ThornedOuroboros ThornedOuroboros Jan 11, 2011
this is really inspirational, descriptive and creative, i love it! you're really good with poetry :)
KAFrak KAFrak Nov 18, 2010
AWWWW, I honestly liked this. It had a story to it and was inspirational
                              pst, check out one of my stories
- - Nov 18, 2010
u may not know yet but i heart poetry, especially the poetry that doesnt really show a purpose until the end. its like unraveling a mystery book one line (i mean page - lines would take forever in a book) at a time