The Tycoon's Trophy Family

The Tycoon's Trophy Family

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Mary Fahey By MaryFahey Completed

Pregnant Gemma and her six year old twins are deliberately left behind on an uninhabited island. Her ex boyfriend denies her unborn child is his and is trying to make her appear forgetful. Or is he? So far Gemma can't prove it one way or another.  
  
Sports medicine tycoon, Dr Hector Wiggins is enduring an unwanted sightseeing trip and rescues them. Since an ex girlfriend violently assaulted him, he plans to treat future relationships like business deals.
   
Gemma meets all his criteria for a trophy wife. She appears gentle, wants a man to love and her ready made family defeats the infertility his ex caused. In return, he'll make sure her life is perfect and pretend to always agree with her.
  
This over indulgence and evasiveness confirm to Gemma she either lost her mind or Hector is playing sinister mind games to get custody of her kids. Although she finds him really attractive, practising karate will keep her alert and strong.

Like the story line and concept, the pictures kind of disturb the reading process.
nannao4 nannao4 4 days ago
ya i understand.. and i will let u know. thanks for understandig
nannao4 nannao4 4 days ago
buzzing? you would think there would be a little bit of a diffrent word to use.. im not saying buzzing does not sound good it does. i just thought there might be another word.
BCWrites BCWrites Jul 09
Wow, great hook. Rescue, cute kids, and handsome doctor. Can't wait to read more.
Oh wow this story is beautifully written and I love the way you incorporated pictures into this as well! Great work!
The sad thing is that if he fought back he'd be the one going to jail