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The Girl He Never Loved #wattys2016

The Girl He Never Loved #wattys2016

84K Reads 4.3K Votes 25 Part Story
nS... By Rainbowblooms7 Updated May 26

"He needs me. In this crucial part of his life. Please let me go adhiraj..." I said with tears down on my blood shot red eyes. 

    "No you're not going anywhere. Now you know the pain.." He smirked at me. 

    "Please adhiraj I'm begging you.." I literally begged in front of him to letting me go but he didn't budge to see my tears. 

   "Hmm. Let's see.." He said pacing in living room. 

   "Ok. I let go off you in one conditions.."before he could say anything I cut of him by saying. "I will accept your every conditions whatever it will be.." 

 "Mark your words women.." He smirked. 

   "Here sign these papers.." He said giving me some papers and seated on the couch. 

  "What is it? " I asked him with confusing look. I started reading the papers but the words appearing blur. I blinked my eyes to clear my vision. The first word I read was DIVORCE. I was shocked very shocked. How can he do this. My heart was aching and the pain was unbearable. My legs were shivering and I fall on the floor. 
     
    " just sign the divorce papers. And leave my house. And never show your face.." He snapped at me and leave the room. 
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 She love him. And she was with him whenever he needs her. But he only wants his revenge. And when he realize he loved her. It was very late. There will be a revenge,  there will love story, but there will be some twist along with the secrets.

EvangellaAkrati EvangellaAkrati Oct 05, 2016
WOW.... totally amazing, it was totally edgy...
                              i really liked  the start...
krazy_kiddo1234 krazy_kiddo1234 Dec 14, 2016
Hey I just loved the way you write and must tell you that I'm so excited for further updates..I've also started writing a new story"It all started with baking"..I would really love it if you could give it a shot and tell me your views on it..stay blessed butterfly! !!
BlueDaisyBunny BlueDaisyBunny Oct 16, 2016
Nice prologue..
                              But who the hell does that guy think he is ..
                              I hate him already..😣😤
Hy your start is interesting, and the way you attracts the readers. There is a track behind every story and I guess your start revels some part of it...
                              Nice start, keep writing...
WriterKV WriterKV Oct 21, 2016
This was a good prologue, it gives us insight a little bit and will keep the reader wanting to read more. A few grammar issues which can be easily fixed.
marwa383 marwa383 Dec 10, 2016
Great job done with the prologue. All the emotions you wanted to convey was conveyed well. May be there are some grammer mistakes but well written.👍