His Salvation

His Salvation

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Baneen Hemani By Baneen121 Updated Nov 27

King Asher Michealson has lived his life killing. He is called the "beast." He enjoys nothing more than spilling blood and love is a curse. He never found his mate, but he plans to kill her whenever he does. 
"To love is to destroy"
What will happen when two tainted souls brought together?
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He leaped on her like an animal, pinning her against the wall. His hands captivating her tiny frame, towering over her. 
He felt something magical, every single place where their bodies touched. No sparks, no tingles, it ignited unknown emotions in him and his wolf, something he never thought he could feel.
He could hear the sound of her ragged breathing, it felt like a melody to his ears. He moved closer, putting his head on her chest above her heart. "Please........no," her body was now trembling with fear. But that didn't stop him from touching her, it was as if she was a drug, he couldn't stop himself even if he wanted to. 

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This has a nice start to it but you might want to slow down a bit so we have a chance to grasp who the characters are and where the plot is going. I actually like where it's going though and it's very interesting. I'll add this to my librsry
Chris_Dixon Chris_Dixon Jun 25
Its really good so far, but may I suggest slowing the pace of the story down a bit? Slow down and try to show just who the characters are in a more vivid way, especially Asher. 
                              
                              I definitely need to read more.
LukeJ-R LukeJ-R Jun 22
This is something that I wish I had found before this moment, as not only did this story prove to be interesting but also very gripping! This was amazingly written C:
The beginning is really nice. The chapter makes Asher come across as an arrogant, ruthless and powerful Alpha. It is clearing seen that he's feared among his pack members and holds a strong position. If I'd take some time, I'd like to read more! Good luck!
Omg can't believe, we have the same taste in cast. Nick and miranda are the actul cast in my werewolf story. 
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Whoa! Everytime I read a mate book, the wolf always reacts in a new way to his mate. This has potential, girl! Keep on!