The heritage of the Valdez family

The heritage of the Valdez family

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Reborn like a phoenix By firstphoenix Updated Nov 12

Leo  is betrayed by almost everyone. He leaves and meet a few persons he is related with and train to have revenge. But 5 years later Percy Jackson gets betrayed from a lot of  gods because he is how Zeus descript it too powerful  . He also leave with Annabeth, the demigods weren't be able to help them. Then they meet Chaos and years later, they meet in a not friendly way.

I like the unique idea! I'm not trying to be rude, but may I suggest you work on your grammar ? Not much of the story makes grammatical sense .
MitaTheOwl MitaTheOwl Nov 12
But... When the sun sets on her 16nth birthday... She will prick her finger on the spindle of w pinning week and fall in to a sleep like death!
                              
                              Yea I watch maleficent to much...