Blood and war (#wattys2016)

Blood and war (#wattys2016)

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Cristal Sieberhagen By csdreamer Completed

Catherine never thought that the only person to speak on her behalf, at her own execution, would be a human lord or that at the whim of her sire, she would be spared to become the property of that human. 

Cast from her home, disowned, disavowed, even the record of her birth struck from her family tree, she rides naked, beaten, burnt and humiliated from her former home and into a world she had never deigned to imagine.  A world of humans... but the past can never be left behind.

mamasue6 mamasue6 Oct 16
Need to remove "it" in the phrase " yet it in" making it read, " yet, in the end,"
raisinbreD raisinbreD Jul 18
I have not even began reading the story as yet but I love the author's opening statement and i love her sense of humor. She is so correct about errors, I edited and proof for a local Newspaper so I know.
RedQueen313 RedQueen313 Jul 31
i know you're editing.. so here..😊 should this be exciting?.
Im on ch 6 already
                              Very beautiful 
                              But so many detail between lines and less dialogue
I didn't start yet but ur opening is very nice 
                              Hope the story will be as well
s-m-b-n s-m-b-n Apr 23, 2014
Beautiful opening with vivid descriptions and such descriptive language. Positively addictive! And I like the drama :)