kidnapped.. not once but twice
A bit rushed. Go more into the thoughts of the characters. More dialogue.
@lady2000 So... out of curiousity, where did the artist thing come from?
please i don't like it when the chapters are short. they just leave you hangin.
You stayed up all night writing that? Oh yeah, not to ruin it but im guessing Drake kidnapped her mom so he could...love her...
@DeadGirl6757 I AGREE I WOILDNT MIND FALLING INLOVE WITH ONE
I LOVE THIS STORY X)
I'm just beginig to read it,its good so far! Plus i think vampires are sooo cool and hot.^.^