Sang's Babies (Completed) (Being Edited)

Sang's Babies (Completed) (Being Edited)

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K.B Foster By KayleighKane Updated Nov 10, 2016

(Undergoing Editing)
Four years ago the Blackbourne team promised not to leave her but on one morning she woke up to silence no one was in there  house empty of their presence. This is the story of Sang going threw a long and hard journey without her boys will they come back will they be to late.

- - Dec 01, 2016
My emotional dollar coaster...☺😊😀😁😆😆
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SthepLiar SthepLiar Dec 03, 2016
Why don't you look for someone to correct the grammar? It's throwing me off the story :/
PaulaWindham PaulaWindham Nov 28, 2016
Please keep going with the story, but you need grammar and punctuation.  Without them, it makes the story extremely difficult to read.
mlinkystark mlinkystark Jul 06, 2016
I love the idea, but your grammar is making it hard to read. The story seems amazing though! I hope you keep up with it!