Play Date // h.s.

Play Date // h.s.

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princess ♡ By LukeHemoji Updated 4 days ago

"You'll still come over and play, right?"
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In which an inexperienced teenage girl falls into a deep pit of little space.

☆ highest rank: #27 in fanfiction ☆

Blooded_Alpha Blooded_Alpha Nov 04, 2016
Quite good for an amateur (not an insult) just ugh spaces, paragraphs. A new paragraph when someone new is speaking or the 'camera' change positions.