forever with you

forever with you

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paula By paulabeurling Updated Dec 14, 2010

when my life started going down hill it went down fast, but all of a sudden thing change and i meet the guy of my dreams but then i think this is to good to be true.

Sally Sally Dec 17, 2010
Hi.
                              I like your writing. 
                              However, you should place the dialogue and arrange conversations in separate lines. 
                              Other than that, you are good!
                              Keep it up!! 
                              :)