In a city of Fools

In a city of Fools

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lara nicole By laranicole-lani Updated Jan 23, 2012

Josephine has lived in Paris her whole life. She is also the perfect daughter, she plays the piano, the violin, the cello, and many other instruments for her father, she models here and there and also is a member of the high society group for her mother. Everything that means anything to her is in Paris but her parents after living almost twenty years in Paris decide to go back to their home, meaning America. She hates the idea of moving far away from everything she has ever known but keeping up with her perfect daughter persona she doesn't protest and lets her parents whisk her away. Now in America she notices how different everything is, she hates it! but still doesn't do anything until she meets the boy who will make her loose her cool.

CelestialEntent CelestialEntent Jun 04, 2011
In a city of fools I was careful and cool but they tore me apart like a hurricane. A handful of moments I wish I could change but I was carried away. Give me therapy ........ Sorry, I couldnt resist
adzo95 adzo95 Dec 16, 2010
ah fair enough, makes sense, but yeah, just a touch so us slow folk can keep up ;P
adzo95 adzo95 Dec 15, 2010
i really like the plot, however, it is hugely fast paced. is it meant to be so, reflecting to rushed nature of her life, or are you just squeezing events in? personally, i'd slow it down
                              really like it though! :)