❛ hold my hand, watch me bleed to death, tell me I'll be okay in the end, make this pain last long, remember I'll come back for more. ❜
| season: 6 - ? |
My throat was dry....and I'm not being rude....just helping.... :)
I feel so dumb for asking this, but do you get the cast member thing?
Not bad. The beginning is a little choppy and that first paragraph is a smidge long, but by the end I was hooked.
A little more showing detail vs. Telling detail and I'd be completely pulled in