"Louis, you won't forget me, will you?"
"Me? Forget? Never."
"Will you ever come back?"
"Of course. I promise."
Wow so far in the future that actually was a great part to add if i do say so myself because it makes the reader is need like hey I wonder why it's so far in the future and thats cool it peaks their interest more...good job I really like it so far
Great beginning not to depressing or anything and it makes sense
We have it the other way round in the uk, so we have it like 17-8-95. Just for future reference :)
ah i remember when i had cubbys, those were some good times... now it's just struggling with stupid locker jams...