The Time Travel Completed,✔

The Time Travel Completed,✔

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Zamora navarone By ZamoraArrieta Completed

When a girl has recurring dreams and she finds herself falling through time in her sleep and ending up in feudal Japan then falls in love was the emperor of the Kingdom, what things await her

  • anime
  • fantasy-romance
  • fanticy
  • historical
  • timetravel
  • youngadults
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kimtrg kimtrg Sep 15
This is only my opinion though, write how you want. We support you. 👍
kimtrg kimtrg Sep 15
I think that her awakening from the dream should be a bit more dramatic. Well... I guess it depends on how you wake up....
kimtrg kimtrg Sep 15
Your sentences are very long, try shortening them a bit so the readers don't get lost
kimtrg kimtrg Sep 15
How would she even know that? She would have instead probably thought it was still a dream until something strange or an indication that it is not a dream happened.
YelenaKnight YelenaKnight Sep 10, 2016
I will enjoy this book even more if it was edited some more. Pretty please?!