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Caught in the Middle

Caught in the Middle

36.9K Reads 395 Votes 23 Part Story
Jaded By clearly_jaded Updated Feb 06, 2011

Jules is an orphan, her parents died in a car crash, leaving behind her stepbrother, Mason and herself.  They are separated at a yound age and put in different foster homes.  Being abused makes her and her bestfriend, Jackson flee from their foster home of 7 years.  They sleep in the park and steal to survive.  When a deal comes across their way that could change their lives they jump at it.  When Jackson doesn't come back she ends up becoming a prisoner.  Things get deeper when she is reunited with her long lost stepbrother, Mace.  She finds herself not only fighting for her life and freedom but for Mace's as well.  Love, Heartbreak, and more sinister things start happening that will keep you on the edge of your seat making you beg for more...  =))

anakelia anakelia Jan 02, 2011
I really really don't care wether you have errors...I'm usually on the look out for them...but I don't care...I just want to keep reading!!!.... I like it so much I'm going to ask other ppl to read it :D
anakelia anakelia Jan 02, 2011
LOL.... I now see how hanahitotsu missed your errors...she got sucked into the story....just like me.
                              ...this is GOOD!!!
                              Great job!!!
anakelia anakelia Jan 02, 2011
sorry to disagree with hanahitotsu... "only adds to my appeal"... his body makes you more attractive? ... since i doubt thats what you meant... I think you meant this instead.
                              only adds to his appeal
marilynjacksonO marilynjacksonO Dec 21, 2010 sad. pretty good so far. I'm really getting into this.