The White Phoenix

The White Phoenix

32.2K Reads 1K Votes 10 Part Story
Francis Danelle Armentrout By francisarmentrout Completed

Harry Potter is an abused boy who lives in the cupboard under the stairs he is small for a 16 year old boy who had scars on his body from his uncle and words carved in to his hand and other places on his body but on his 17th birthday he would go in to a creature inheritance because his uncle want to far one night and it made the Phoenix tears react and change him in to a very rare White Phoenix and a submissive one at that so when he changed the Goblins came in to his room and took him to the Goblin bank were he learn he has been lied to his whole live and he also finds his Dominate mates in two red headed twins             
Read and find out what was hidden from him and how he settles in to his new life of being tooken care of and not having to protect other's any more

  • andthetwinsofcourse
  • baddumbledore
  • badweasleys
  • characterbashing
  • charlie
  • creatureinheritance
  • exceptforbill
  • fred
  • georgeweasley
  • goodvoldemort
  • harrypotter
  • kidnapped
  • love
  • mates
  • percyweasley
  • stolen
This was supposed to be a chapter and or paragraph but it's basically one sentence. These are what you should be using " . , ? ! '
Can you add some (""'s) to your book it is really good but the lack of    ( "   '   !   ? )
LyraBalaqua LyraBalaqua Aug 28
My friend PUNCTUATION is taught in primary school for a reason. Use it.
HeyImLars HeyImLars Jun 15
Who ever wrote this needs to use ->. And "..."! I can't read this! I don't care if it's your first story! Use grammar! It's just like writing on paper!
AshleyChila AshleyChila Oct 13
... Have you ever heard of this little thing called good grammer? Trust me it is a pretty little thing and you learn it in something called school. Please use it.
Great plot but I can't read this anymore because I need punctuation.