The Aberration

The Aberration

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Bard Constantine By BardConstantine Completed

When a freak storm engulfs a mill, the workers learn quickly that there is much more to fear than just heavy rain.

Something else arrives with the storm-macabre creatures that alter their shapes and features with every attack. In order to survive the night, the employees will have to rely on a man whose sanity is questionable. For he claims to have faced the same attacks before, over ages of time.

*This novel is a published work and is available everywhere. It can be purchased at Amazon: http://amzn.to/1PMmgKm/, and you can visit the official website at http://bardwritesbooks.com.*

The sequel, Torment of Tantalus, will be published in 2016

  • creature
  • fear
  • horror
  • psychological
  • terror
Bumpeh Bumpeh Dec 30, 2017
Wow, a great start! I really like your descriptions of the smoke and disaster area. Your dialogue is pretty spot on too, it seems very realistic to me. Keep up the good work!
IDunn0N0thing IDunn0N0thing Sep 01, 2017
Hey, I'm really enjoying your book so far! I'm actually wrote my own novel. A bit of a humorous one. Do you mind checking it out and maybe promoting it. Just a request. Thank you for your time and have a great day.
darkhorseman1978 darkhorseman1978 Mar 28, 2017
Woah. That was one helluva opening chapter. A suicide then an explosion, not a likely coincidence.
TXejas19 TXejas19 May 11, 2016
Lol judging by all the comments lined along the first page alone, this must be a hell of a story
KhalilOLarkin KhalilOLarkin May 20, 2016
I truly enjoyed this. I am excited to see what's going to happen later on.
yutta-hey yutta-hey Nov 12, 2016
As someone going to school to become a police officer, and later a homicide detective, I can confirm that these are the worst cases.
                              
                              Its not even the fact that you spent so many hours on a case that won't be solved, its more the want for answers to soothe your soul if the questions.