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If It Wasn't For Fate//Lams Fic

If It Wasn't For Fate//Lams Fic

12.9K Reads 540 Votes 5 Part Story
Xyla ☽ By xylaas Updated Jul 14, 2016

Modern/College AU no one wants


 John met Alex  by Alex accidentally bumping into John.

**I'll add more later, but I'll probably forget because I hate writing summaries.**

Muy eyes can't believe what are they seeing, Alex going to sleep by himself!?
Some advice; make a new paragraph for every sentence of dialogue. It's neater, nice to read, and grammatically correct.
red-soda red-soda May 14
Just a question.. Why are commas outside of dialogue where it doenst belong? ("Where have you been?",)
GTE UP JOHNNY BOY , GET UP JOHNNY BOY, GET UP CAUS THE WORLD HAS LEFT YOU OYING ON THE GROOOUND
Sorry to break it to you Alex, but this is a lams fix and that ain't gonna be the last time.
red-soda red-soda May 14
Attempt to steer clear of any POV changes during the middle of chapters; they take away from what's already there and feel awkward.