A New Beginning

A New Beginning

4.1K Reads 651 Votes 18 Part Story
Noreah Smith By NoreahSmith Updated Jan 01

This is a story about a young woman that has had enough and wants to start over again. It is a reverse harem.

Excerpt

In the beginning he who shall not be named was a great help but soon he treated me badly. Started hitting me. Not enough to bruise but painful none the less. He dated other women and told me as to hurt me but I could not leave. I felt bad and lonely so I stuck. Perhaps the reason of all this is because I was bullied since I was four years old. I had a low self-steem because of it. I still got attention from him and at times he was his old self. Giving me hope things would change for the better. I had hoped for 4,5 years. It never came. Two weeks ago I decided I had enough of it. I knew I had to be worth something right.

Justonename Justonename Jun 04, 2016
I can imagine how uncomfortable she felt walkng into a room full of six guys, strangers no less. 
                              You have a really good story foundation. Love it. :)
Tabs95 Tabs95 Jun 04, 2016
These guys all sound very nice. I loved how they were quick to try to set her at ease. Can't wait for more. 😀
anon2404 anon2404 Jun 10, 2016
That is gorgeous.  They're obviously intending to treat the occupant like a princess.  I think your girl may just deserve that too.
je11ybean262 je11ybean262 Dec 29, 2016
☺️ They all found her attractive immediately! That's great!
anon2404 anon2404 Jun 10, 2016
Nice start.  I would have freaked the heck out if a stranger did that to me; she must have been so tired not to.
je11ybean262 je11ybean262 Dec 29, 2016
My mama bear side lifted her head and shouted "Don't unlock that door! Don't ride off with strangers!" 😅 She's too trusting. Then again she may have finely tuned instincts after her last loser boyfriend. I'm excited to see where this goes!