Unveiled

Unveiled

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Jacklyn By Jacklyn Updated 6 days ago

Perfection is a word you would describe sixteen year old Luxor Everstone's life. Well almost. Beautiful, popular, and wealthy, she was envied, and had the world at her feet. But all she craved was a normal family. 

And then a freak accident happened.

Sudden her perfect existence was obliterated. Responsible for the accident, she had become her communities pariah and most hated person. With her identity stripped away, she no longer recognises herself. Secrets are revealed, which rocks the foundation of who she is, only to be replaced with hidden answers. 

Forced to move to a new town in the middle of nowhere, she must adapt to the lifestyle and mysterious people surrounding her. One of them being a boy with enchanting eyes the colour of toffee. 

Hunter is an arrogant, gorgeous, bad boy who loves the chase, and Luxor is his target. 

She wants to stay away, he will only cause trouble, but he has the ability to know things about her, secrets that are locked away. 

Sparks fly when they are together, and there's a connection drawing her to him, like a moth to a flame. 

Will it be a blessing or curse for her to be near him?

Will Luxor find out true answers she desperately needs?

Be prepared to be drawn into a world where nothing is what it seems!

HIGHEST RANKING #52 in Paranormal 17/11/2016

THIS IS BEING EDITED AT THE MOMENT INTO 3RD PERSON AND WILL TAKE A COUPLE OF DAYS. CHAPTER EIGHTEEN AND NINETEEN WILL BE IN 1ST PERSON. SORRY FOR CONFUSION IM EDITING AS QUICKLY AS POSSIBLE.

Jacklyn Jacklyn Sep 24
Yep that's great. Maybe at the end, and then you can let me know if I've conveyed it enough!
TheMarcoToni TheMarcoToni 5 hours ago
Homesickness pained her? I thought It was only my country we said that.
SheaRyhai SheaRyhai Nov 03
Though-🖋 Sentence might stand better without this word though 🔍
kathiel12 kathiel12 Sep 29
Ha, ha, yeah.  I had a discussion I opened titled, Do your characters resemble yourself on the clubs.  I discovered fascinating data.  Most of us either write characters that have some of our traits or have traits of our friends.  So this is normal.  Heading to your first chapter.
So great! This is like a really intense dramatic horror movie seen, where you find out the nice hot guy is really a creeper. Can picture this perfectly
Will do! Hopefully will get through a chapter before bed tonight ;)