Unveiled

Unveiled

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Jacklyn By Jacklyn Updated 2 days ago

"Don't be scared my child. I am not here to hurt you." His voice was like honey that dripped from the nectar of the sweetest flower. 
  "What do you want?" Luxor held her hand against her eyes, and squinted into the glow, her voice too calm. 
  "You of course." He cooed.
  "Why?"
  His voice growled, deep as a stone. "Because you are mine."
  
  Waking from a coma sixteen-year-old Luxor Everstone finds she is accused of attempted murder of her best friend, that she has no recollection of. Strange blue markings have now appeared, snaking up her arms, and her eyes turned to a vibrant aqua. 
  
  Forced to move to a strange new town in the middle of nowhere, she meets an arrogant, egotistical, and dangerous bad boy with enchanting toffee coloured eyes. A connection draws her to him, and sparks fly. She wants to stay away, but he has the power to get what he wants.
  
  And he wants Luxor.
  
  But he isn't the only one. Almost nightly a faceless man enters her dreams who wants to claim her, and as much as she wants to run, she can't escape. 
  
  All she knows is her living nightmare has just begun.
  
  HIGHEST RANKING #52 in Paranormal 17/11/2016

UncoveredMoon UncoveredMoon Dec 25, 2016
 #LC 
                              Great descriptions! I really enjoyed reading this chapter, I honestly think this is one of the best chapters I ever read, in-depth descriptions everywhere.
Spobyfanfiction3 Spobyfanfiction3 Dec 11, 2016
 #coffee hunters
                              
                              This was an excellent start! I love how descriptive it is. I'm interested to see what type of supernatural being the baby is. I definitely am intrigued in this story and I can't wait to read more.
Jacklyn Jacklyn Sep 24, 2016
Yep that's great. Maybe at the end, and then you can let me know if I've conveyed it enough!
TheMarcoToni TheMarcoToni Dec 03, 2016
Homesickness pained her? I thought It was only my country we said that.
Tash91 Tash91 3 days ago
Oh my hat! Absolutely stunning! I'm so sad for Amy and I hope her daughter grows up knowing the sacrifice her mom made for her. Truly beautiful
abiran1995 abiran1995 Jan 11
I love your descriptions throughout. it was easy for me to imagine what was happening.