Behind Closed Doors

Behind Closed Doors

52.9K Reads 776 Votes 12 Part Story
Sarah By xShattered_Roses Updated Nov 10, 2014

I feel guilty as Bryan forcefully shoves me against the wall, snatching my shirt off he attacks my neck, roughly kissing me and biting my ear. I whimper as he trails my body with kisses, he pushes me up against the wall; I latch my legs around his waist. He kisses me up and down his lips trailing my body, I nothing on but my underwear; my skin prickles I want to scream with desire. “What about Lauren?” I ask in between kisses as he grips my chest. “What she doesn't know won’t kill her.” 

Its finally summertime for Eighteen year old Jessica, Lauren, and Bryan, the trio has planned for this all year, but when Lauren the glue of the group, the peacemaker and Bryan's girlfriend, is leaving for the whole summer, the plans turn upside down. With no parents, no school, no distractions, and most of all no overprotective girlfriend Lauren, Bryan and Jessica might get to know each other better. ;)

  • baby
  • boys
  • boytoy
  • cheesy
  • drama
  • funny
  • highschool
  • highschoolromance
  • hot
  • love
  • popularity
  • revenge
  • summer
Eleni10 Eleni10 Mar 16, 2013
This was a lovely start! It wasn't boring, and it Definitly made me want to read on! 
                              I think you could go over it and make a few corrections, such as punctuation. But other than that, I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see how their relationship progresses. :D #Voted!
Rearea1998 Rearea1998 Nov 23, 2012
Wow ketchup? xD that made me laugh. He's already all worried about her. He likes her <3 this might be a problem for Lauren... Great job!
Beautiful_Starz Beautiful_Starz Nov 23, 2012
I enjoyed reading this! Your plot is very intersting. I also think that your cover is awesome lol Anyways I think your story had potential! #voted
southofeverything southofeverything Nov 19, 2012
There are some errors, it does not flow as well as it should in some places. I think if you add a little more detail, it won't seem so rushed.
You_Are_Uniquee You_Are_Uniquee Nov 19, 2012
Omg! This was so funny (in a good way) and Jessica is one smart girl!(; It's a good story line and sounds intresting! I'll be reading on soon!
oona05 oona05 Nov 19, 2012
Boy, she pulled a stunt just to drive! Devious girl:D
                              Some very small grammar needs to be cleaned... but other than that, a good start!
                              :)
                              Oona