Acceptance: A Transgender Story

Acceptance: A Transgender Story

4.7K Reads 230 Votes 10 Part Story
Cody Chasen By thatLgbtwriter Completed

Boy meets girl. Boy likes girl, girl likes boy. A simple love story. 

But... it's not quite that simple. You see, they both have secrets. 

Boy is transgender. 
Girl? Well, I suppose you will have to read to find out.

Great! Also, instead of Rriiiinnnngg you wrote Briiiiinnnngg...
I like this so far. I like that you start out with him getting ready for school like he normally would. :)
I really liked the interaction between Michael and Scarlett, it seemed very natural and well done. :) You have a very real way of writing. Although, there are a few grammatical mistakes here and there, they don't fully detract from the story itself, or make it hard to read. :)
whispyfog whispyfog Aug 16
Good chapter. Is his name actually spelled Micheal, or Michael?
I can't wait to see how this goes, and I don't just mean the plot, the characters feelings too ;)
Nice character interaction I like it. :-) Be careful with your verb tenses.