Hi, Mr Shadow

17 Part Story 36K Reads 742 Votes
Malin By malin87 Completed
What happens when a shadow falls in love with its owner?
    They have to watch the one they love live its whole life till death, unnoticed. A very painful lovestory.
    This story is about a shadow and a girl who broke that rule and found love against all odds. Follow the shadows's travel to reach humanity, his struggle to adapt to feelings he never knew existed, supported by the girl of his dreams.
The story is indeed nice. The plot which i liked the most was the idea of souls which makes my goosebumps on !!!!! appreciative #
Wow... This is like an awesome idea for a story! And a great first chapter! After I finish reading 'Secretly Famous' I'm gonna read this one :D
Like it. It grabbed me and took me. I cant really say more than the others since they all are right in some way. you hav my vote! :)
Your english is really good if it isn't your native language! Wow i'm impressed, i could never do that. The Originality of the idea definitely is a plus, keep going :)
I love the writing for the shadow.. it's poetic, but still a story, and I would have to say I like this 10+ on originality too!!  It's so different than anything I've read :)  
                                    
                                    I knew you'd be amazing writing in english =)  Keep it going !!! 
I've never read something like this 10+ on originality! I really loved it, specially the last paragraph...so....yeah! like I really felt it! 
                                    BTW your English is great!!
                                    Ary