Have you locked the door?

Have you locked the door?

24.6K Reads 1.6K Votes 15 Part Story
CatQuill25732 By catquill25732 Completed

Melissa lives the so-called perfect life (Though she is very irresponsible). Living with your best friend and you are the only child of your parents that's why they pamper you a lot. What can be better than this, eh? But her life becomes exactly the opposite when for a history project, Melissa and Elena leave for Greece. Melissa, being irresponsible left the door open. What's the worst? Her parents have gone to Australia for some official work...What will happen when she returns and feels that there is someone in the house other than her and finds that there is a spirit in her house?☠


Highest Ranking : #1 Horror (7.21.2016)

  • adventure
  • bestfriend
  • creak
  • creaks
  • death
  • devils
  • door
  • doors
  • evil
  • evilness
  • fear
  • horror
  • mourn
  • mystery
  • scary
  • spirits
  • thrill
  • thriller
  • underworld
  • wattys2016
Teatreehw Teatreehw Dec 13, 2017
Neighbours *rolls eyes* cant they just close the door for her.
Tash91 Tash91 Aug 18, 2016
I really enjoyed this chapter, even the parts that gave me the shivers lol
theresa-may theresa-may Jul 25, 2016
God, I loved how the dog was named Frodo. I enjoyed this chapter but I would suggest that you avoid trying to change POV so often this early on. It prevents the reader from forming a strong connection with one of your characters.