Have you locked the door? #Wattys2016

Have you locked the door? #Wattys2016

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CatQuill25732 By catquill25732 Completed

Melissa lives the so-called perfect life (Though she is very irresponsible). Living with your best friend and you are the only child of your parents that's why they pamper you a lot. What can be better than this, eh? But her life becomes exactly the opposite when for a history project, Melissa and Elena leave for Greece. Melissa, being irresponsible left the door open. What's the worst? Her parents have gone to Australia for some official work...What will happen when she returns and feels that there is someone in the house other than her and finds that there is a spirit in her house?☠

Highest Ranking : #3 Horror (7.21.2016)

Tash91 Tash91 Aug 18, 2016
I really enjoyed this chapter, even the parts that gave me the shivers lol
catquill25732 catquill25732 Jul 25, 2016
Thanks a lot to all my fellow readers. I laugh at your funny comments and I appreciate your suggestions and feedback. Specially @messytessa
Jackie4White Jackie4White Aug 08, 2016
Wait is she in college or high school? 16 year olds aren't usually in college and parents act like that in high school...
stylobebe99 stylobebe99 Aug 14, 2016
so much yelling in the morning, poor she... but interesting plot
messytessa messytessa Jul 25, 2016
God, I loved how the dog was named Frodo. I enjoyed this chapter but I would suggest that you avoid trying to change POV so often this early on. It prevents the reader from forming a strong connection with one of your characters.