A Bastard's Love - Game of Thrones: Jon Snow #Wattys2016

A Bastard's Love - Game of Thrones: Jon Snow #Wattys2016

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House StarkGaryen By mbooklover Updated Oct 27

Azure. They call her that beyond the wall because people who come across her, her azure blue eyes are the last thing they see and the last thing they mutter. But the Jon Snow, son of Lord Eddard Stark and the band of exiled thieves and rapists who are called the Night's Watch don't know that. They haven't heard of Azure and her raids on the wildling people or the shadow wolf pack that protect her. What happens when Azure and Jon meet? Will they see eye to eye? Will they form an alliance? A rivalry? Or better yet, love?

Credit to the amazing @LadybirdCookie for the cover. She's the best.

Good start. Not boring at all, you just did what should have been told at the very start :)
It wasnt boring! It wss great and i love the details! Wish i could write like this
vernona101 vernona101 Jun 16
I think this whole bit is in past tense, but the rest of the chapter is I present, so joined should be join, advanced should be advance, supported should be support and called should be calls !❤️
Brilliant beginning!!! Really promising start and the description is beautiful :)
furies- furies- Jul 09
I really liked this but it seemed a bit choppy in some places where it threw me off in reading but i loved the details
vernona101 vernona101 Jun 16
Found it! I think this should be is (; and the wasn't should be isn't because you've been using present tense ❤️