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One Look At You (Spoby)

One Look At You (Spoby)

1.7K Reads 132 Votes 15 Part Story
Kelly Marie By Fiction_by_Kelly Updated Apr 30

Spencer is on her way to Maine where she will be summering with her family. She's looking forward to sitting out by the pool with her books and going to the beach. When her family's car dies outside of town she encounters a gorgeous mechanic and in an instant her plans for the summer change.

RElizabethM RElizabethM Oct 21, 2016
I liked the meet cute and I'm curious about the book she accidentally left behind. I think there could be a bit more specific description and the dad does a lot of yelling. :) The writing is clear and easy to read.
TacosForAll TacosForAll Nov 08, 2016
Already shipping :D 
                              
                              You're grammar is a little off in some places, but other than that it's perfect 👍🏻
TacosForAll TacosForAll Nov 08, 2016
Great chapter although I'm slightly confused about all the characters. Who is dating who? Anyway, great job! 😄
Fiction_by_Kelly Fiction_by_Kelly Nov 08, 2016
Yeah one of the issues is all the characters but for now at least the couples are 
                              
                              Hanna and Caleb
                              
                              Jason and Aria 
                              
                              Emily and Ben 
                              
                              Spencer and Andrew 
                              
                              Alison is single sorta (she dates around) 
                              
                              Toby (the hunky mechanic) is single, Jenna is his ex 
                              
                              Jenna is dating Garrett
RElizabethM RElizabethM Oct 21, 2016
@Spobyfanfiction3 I like the broken down car. What was your other idea?