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OC Reviews

OC Reviews

9.2K Reads 263 Votes 17 Part Story
Writer-Chan By JustAGamingGirl Updated Apr 08

Are you worried that your OC is a Mary, Border-line, or Anti Sue?
      Well, you've come to the right place! We do reviews on these fandoms:
      Undertale
      My Little Pony
      Five Nights At Freddy's
      Until Dawn
      Percy Jackson
      Creepypasta
      Twilight ~Shudders~
      The Maze Runner
      Minecraft Diaries
      Doctor Who
      Life Is Strange
      Bleach
      Mirai Nikki (I don't do other anime, stop asking)
      and Pokémon!
      You can also put in ones you want for original stories too!
      Remember, I will try to be nice, but there has to be some criticism. I hope you have some great OCs ~And joke ones for the lulz~ to share! Good luck!

miranda1685 miranda1685 6 days ago
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                              Did you just make the o.c because you wanted to be in that fandom?: No. Definitely not. I just liked her concept and thought "maybe she could be a good Undertale O.C." (Nuff said)
SuperPika SuperPika Sep 27, 2016
tbh though loki confused. are poisonous snakes and spiders considered weaknesses??? like wouldnt almost anyone die if bitten??
AliciaBrock544 AliciaBrock544 Jun 11, 2016
Ahahahaha I loved the review and thank you for doing it now I know what few things I need to work some I need to keep to give some plot on the story. And yeah I need come up with more enemies.
Podgeeizkewl Podgeeizkewl Dec 30, 2016
Y DOESNT WEAKNESS HAVE A STAR ********** that's discrimination.
AliciaBrock544 AliciaBrock544 Aug 16, 2016
Wait  don't the other creepypasta have powers like Slenderman and his brothers, laughing Jack and that one devil guy?
AliciaBrock544 AliciaBrock544 Jun 11, 2016
And yeah least about the old man taking of everything is pretty dumb and finding another wouldn't be that hard for her.