Red Skies | ✔

Red Skies | ✔

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L.D Jones By ProjectPr1de Completed

''Ya' know, I've always wanted to become a superhero...''
  
       After six teenagers wander off into a forest during a high school party, they are captured by the infamous terrorist group known as Blodgharm. During their capture, they meet the leader of Blodgharm, who reveals to them that they all are a part of an evolved group of humans known as Primes.
                          
       During a rescue mission orchestrated by PRIDE, a covert military organization that has been tasked with bringing down Blodgharm, the teens are exposed to the element Primonium in its rawest form. The element, which is deadly to normal humans, grants them special abilities. 
                          
       While with PRIDE, the group learns to control and master their abilities. However, after learning about Blodgharm's nefarious plan to expose the world to a weaponized form of the experimental element, Primonium, they are in a race against time to stop them. Heroes will be pushed to the limit; secrets will be unveiled. 
          
       And the skies will turn red.
  
  [Highest Rating: #19 in Sci-Fi]
  Book 1 of the Heroes series
                        
                          Cover by: @ProjectPr1de
                          
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Your descriptions are very detailed which brings your work to life. I would caution you however, as sometimes the writing can get dense making it difficult to follow what's actually happening.
Nova_Io Nova_Io Jun 18
If this were a movie, I think someone would be narrating the whole prologue in a very, very deep voice
kspxec kspxec Jun 20
that was breathtaking. I literally did not realize I was holding my breath the entire time. currently, I'm reconsidering the entirety of my two chapters.
horcruxes- horcruxes- Jul 18
This prologue was so good! It had so much detail explained throughout it and as soon as I finished reading it I wanted more. I don’t find anything wrong with this at all.
Based on the story summary, that ended up being a lot darker than I anticipated for the first chapter, haha. I enjoyed your visceral descriptions, though I hope the rest of the story isn't this gloomy for its entirety =P
ofthesea- ofthesea- Jun 29
I'm so glad I can finally comment on this book now that the results of the Elimination Awards have been posted! I knew right away from this prologue that this was going to be a great read and your descriptions are spot on.  Well done!  Way to draw in your reader into your atmosphere.