so this is about love that is very complicated and the 2nd poem is about missing the person i love.
This is amazing! I love how you had the different sides of love !
awesome. . your lines are nice, and your rhyming is sick.. really good job.
oh yea, i write a little poetry too, if u wanna see what i write, drop by my site. . let me know wen u post something else :-)
wow, this is awesome! i really really like your style! The conflict and the war you wrote about was deep, and your choice of words was great. voted.