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A Game Called Love

A Game Called Love

23.9K Reads 1K Votes 12 Part Story
Adeeba Fatima By aayika Updated Aug 21, 2016

" I'll destroy you in the most beautiful way possible, and when I leave you, you'll finally understand why storms are named after people. "
  She burned like the sun,trying to hide all the darkness that clouded her life,but her fire burned him to ashes.
  Reece Salazar has spent his entire life coming second to the great Aurora Williams.The perfect little miss goody shoes who never loses an opportunity to rub her victory on his face.Best friends at six,bitter rivals at twenty.When the battles get personal and it's no more about business deals and projects but love and seduction,will they realize they have more to lose than what they have to win?

wendara wendara Jul 23, 2016
                              From the beginning was captivating, and I was eager to know what will happen to the two. Glad you gave us a little description of what happened when they were young. 
                              The plot is fine, and the chapter is neither too long nor short.
                              In one sentence;I love it.
orchestrations orchestrations Jun 08, 2016
This actually happens a lot. So many friendships go to waste because of this.
neharica neharica Jul 01, 2016
                              I really like this chapter. The starting of the part is interesting and I like the characters too. Your descriptions are good as you describe the prize ceremony. You are successful in pulling out the emotions of Reece too. 
                              Overall it's a nice start. 
                              Keep writing :)
221stCentury 221stCentury Jun 13, 2016
                              Let me begin by praising the prologue. Immediately, critical tension is set in the story. This is difficult to achieve but I think this chapter pulled it off really well. Great job! I am intrigued by the relationship between Reece and Aurora. And I hope to see more XD
lypophreniac lypophreniac Aug 12, 2016
                              I love the beginning of your book so far. Your writing is the kind of writing that is addicting, and that's good! I suggest you should fix some grammar mistakes made here and there.
LaceyHeath16 LaceyHeath16 Jul 25, 2016
                              You sometimes are very repetitive and use the same words over again. Try to start away from this. :) Your sentence structure is very professional and I found myself getting lost in you words.
                              Great job!
                              All in all, it was a great chapter!
                              Lacey xx