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My Life In The Gang #projectbadgirls

My Life In The Gang #projectbadgirls

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Lunar_Eclipse By foreverbad125 Completed


Chance Wiliams isn't your avarage teenager. She is the bad girl of the school and most feared girl of the New York . She is the gang leader of the Black rose. Her gang is number 1 in New York.

Now meet Ace Grayson. He is the leader of the White Shadows. He's gang moved from London to New York. His gang was the #1 in London. 

What happens when this 2 meet each other. Both of them want to be number 1.  And plus school drama, love, hate and old enemies.

But at the end who will win that game? 

Read and find out.

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For this chapter I'm noticing that you are missing some commas or periods at the end of dialogue. I would just go back and add them in just so it's an easier read.
Also it's cool that you have pictures of your idea of like the clothing she's wearing and her apartment but I think it brings the reader in more if you describe it.
ThursdayEnds ThursdayEnds Dec 14, 2016
i like how the strategy is all laid down. this is really cool