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A Moment in Time [X-Men First Class]- On Hold

A Moment in Time [X-Men First Class]- On Hold

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Capsicle_irl By Capsicle_irl Updated Nov 20, 2016

This story takes place during X-Men First Class.  Mutants all over the world are being exposed and discovered.  Sebastian Shaw is trying to start World War III.  At the age of 20 Lace Turner meets Charles Xavier and Erik Lehnsherr, ever since they've met she has been very intrigued with the both of them.  Will she be able to control her powers to help the X-Men or will she fall victim to her own mind?

I own the character of Lace who is played by Amber Heard. The X-Men and their storylines belong to Fox/Marvel.

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MakeMeSwoon MakeMeSwoon Jul 13, 2016
Question: does she know how long her freezing ability lasts on ppl? Can she reverse it?
arthurcurrys arthurcurrys Jun 10, 2016
I like the way that she freaked out because of what she did some time ago, but now she's confident of herself and very intelligent
Capsicle_irl Capsicle_irl Jun 10, 2016
Awww thanks and I'm enjoying developing this character as time goes on she will probably be even more confident
B-Marie B-Marie Feb 10
Another good chapter! I will say that there are a few mistakes though. Try to space out your dialogue. It can get hard to see who's talking. Also, don't switch POV's so often. Possibly, change it every chapter or so. It helps the story flow and doesn't confuse the reader. Overall, good job!
B-Marie B-Marie Feb 10
Wow! This chapter was amazing! Her powers are so original and different! You have a lot of good descriptions and you have a great plot started. I can't wait to keep reading! Great job!
Spydergirl Spydergirl Sep 12, 2016
WHAAAA! I am incredibly sorry for not participating last week, so here I am this week. Your opening chapter is very intriguing, and it left me craving more. You are truly a talented writer!