A Normal Life?

A Normal Life?

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Megan By Megan1793 Updated Dec 16, 2010

Elliana Faye's life is anything but normal. She is forced to elope with her love, Damien Gates, when her father forbids her to see him. Why does he forbid her from seeing him? It isn't only the fact that he's part of the help at the Faye's estate, but Elliana has a secret she's keeping from him. It's a family secret, and a mysterious one at that, one that even Elliana doesn't know the full extent of. The thing is, Elliana doesn't want to know. When her life finally seems like it might have a chance at being normal, her past comes back to haunt her. Will she ever be able to live a normal, happy life with Damien?

Megan_Pink Megan_Pink Feb 19, 2011
wow, that's actually pretty decently written
                              
                              if there's any criticism from me....
                              its that you use the word ' reluctantly ' too much
                              haha - keep up the awesome work =D
XxSimplyJJxX XxSimplyJJxX Dec 12, 2010
Sounds great! ^-^ You're very descriptive and I LOVE authors who know how to be descriptive. :D
                               Keep Posting luv!
                              <3 JJ