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Yours... Forever... ✔

Yours... Forever... ✔

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Kiddo By Kiddo_Star Completed

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The fateful day... That fateful day... She left me... She left me alone in this world... To fight this cruel world... To stay in this cruel world... Why can't I follow her? What mistake had I committed to lose her? Or was I the mistake myself? Was I reason she left me? I loved her... I still love her... And I will love her till my last breath... Can't I get a Chance if I did a mistake? Can't I get my love back? She is my love, my life, my breath, my heartbeat, my reason to live... What is the use of me if she isn't beside me? Do I not deserve to be loved? Am I so bad? Will I never get the joy of being loved ever in my life? I love her... I love her a lot... I Love You my Jaan... I love you so much sweetheart...

I really like the start of this. You did great in keeping my attention to the end. I really like your writing style, it flows and it's simple. I'm really excited to know more about what had happened to these two. Good Job !
NOO ! Don't tell me that what I read is really ! This was a great chapter, I'm already attached to these two. I love your writing style and I love the fact that you added some of your language.