England's Finest Rebel

England's Finest Rebel

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Lottie By cromercrabber Completed

Charlotte's parents get sick and tired of her bad behaviour, so they ship her off to America to stay with her distant Uncle and four male cousins to try to save her from ruining her life by being rebellious, with eighteen expulsions, and a criminal record under her belt, will she become the well behaved girl that her parents wish, or will she remain unchanged?

.....What kind of dumb parents send a rebel to America to ¨learn to behave¨?
Yeah, we don't really use lads here that often, but guys is most common.
America is the last place where a person learns to behave but I really like your story so far
Lizzygare Lizzygare Feb 24, 2015
if you changed lads to guys that would sound more American (I'm from America)
EmilyTheRhino EmilyTheRhino Dec 06, 2013
Very interesting plot, but be more descriptive and fix those spelling and grammar errors. I dont like when a story isnt very descriptive, they can get boring. But very good so far, 6.8/10!