death may flow

death may flow

727 Reads 5 Votes 6 Part Story
nikye By nikye1 Updated Jan 16, 2011

a young girl torn from her family by the mysterious "master" 
a young boy with expectations to fill
a story that will bind their lives together 
and mystical beasts to fill in the __________  oh yeah BLANKS

nikye1 nikye1 Apr 02, 2011
@applechomper thnx and yes my grammer and paragraph placement blow but ill fix it ..... eventually
shadoww shadoww Jan 23, 2011
Your story is good! :) But use more punctuation..then it would be awesome! :P oh.. btw.. I'm done with the second chapter of mine, if you wanna read it! :P
nikye1 nikye1 Jan 20, 2011
kinda saddens me to see i have 300 reads
                              
                              only because they are mainly on the first page :S
nikye1 nikye1 Jan 19, 2011
@phamous  thank you so much for everything 
                              
                              and thank you 300 readers thank you all :)
nikye1 nikye1 Jan 18, 2011
@xpunkgurlx  ummm i did :P just havent reiterated it lately :P anyway glad you like it :)
nikye1 nikye1 Jan 16, 2011
@mhmmHaille 
                              i understand and yes i will fix it the first part was written over a year ago as it says at the top thank you for the information i will fix it asap