Sakamaki's Little sister

Sakamaki's Little sister

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Kawaii_Akuma By Kawaii_Akuma Updated Jul 29, 2016

Meet Aiya Kumori secretly a Sakamki . She ran away from home and was adopted by Seiji Komori . Why did she ran away ? Well .... Its a secret . 
She is Yui's Younger Sister . Yui and Aiya have different personality . 
Yui and Aiya was sent to the Sakamaki's Mansion and because Sacrificial Brides or will something amusing happen ....

OC × Diabolik Lovers × Vampire Night

AshuraNya AshuraNya Aug 21
*At the end. "In the end" is a sentence used to describe how something ended up as. It's either at the start of a sentence or at the the very end of it. It's always "in the end", nothing changes about it.
AshuraNya AshuraNya Aug 21
Yuki is too sweet of a girl to do that. Very OOC. Is questionable though if we are talking about after she became a vampire. We didn't get much Intel on that. Still believe it'd be OOC though.
AshuraNya AshuraNya Aug 21
Shouldn't at the start of a sentence is used to form a question =-=
AshuraNya AshuraNya Aug 21
Exaggerating the word office. Don't put the same word at the start of the sentence and at the end of it.
AshuraNya AshuraNya Aug 21
Do not flip the sentence to a question when it's not going to be one. 
                              Another way you could've phrased that is : 1. "I'm so curious. Who are we going to live with?" 2. I'm curious about who we are going to live with." 3. "I'm curious, who are we going to live with?"
AshuraNya AshuraNya Aug 21
Don't place a space before a period. For example : 1. "I grabbed the apple and took a bite." 2. I grabbed the apple and took a bite ." 
                              You don't use instance number 2 because periods are meant to come right after the word. No blank spaces.